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Senses

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Senses…
I feel the warmth you give to me
I feel your words You help me breathe.
I love you is not enough,
because no words can explain your touch.
I see your eyes blue and kind
I see your heart and how its lined.
I love you with all my might,
and nothing love could ever be a better sight.
I hear your voice gentle and true,
I hear nothing better but to listen to you.
I smell your scent so sweet and mild,
I smell your love soft as a child.
And mother natures flowers couldn't smell as sweet as you.
I taste your kiss during the dusks slow bloom,
I taste your lips as tender as the stars and their brother moon.
Your taste to me is unmatched your lips as creamy as ice cream on a spoon.
All my senses burn for you and my soul feels light and free
and all my heart belongs to you And I know you belong with me.
A simple poem
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thepunkfromkenowhere's avatar
This is more than simple.
It's complex sensory details
Just conveyed in a simple manner
You have a way with words that few on DA do
And that dear is something to be proud of.

When I read this poem the first time
It filled me with such joy because it reminded me of my fiancee
And when I read it the second time it made me weep tears of joy
Because it brought back soo many memories for me
I was able to mentally picture and practically sense ever detail



Long story short
You are AWESOME
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